A minor problem is that what is affected by the service need not be
the service requester or belong to the requester. The more serious
deficiency is that the definition only refers to a service instance.
There is the general service,
the service offered by a particular provider,
and the service instance as requested by a consumer.
A car rental service is a general service, perhaps offered by
several different companies.
The Hertz car rental service is a particular service.
When I rent from Hertz, that is an instance of this
particular service.